tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5964635297586456513.post1561629604967567324..comments2024-03-05T20:20:37.524-08:00Comments on Scotty Watty Doodle All The Day: A Decade Of Lies...A Short StoryHygge Manhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07518356793147594574noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5964635297586456513.post-25665085330331391572013-07-24T00:46:06.391-07:002013-07-24T00:46:06.391-07:00This drew me and I like the plot but once again I&...This drew me and I like the plot but once again I'm left frustrated. 500 words just seems to be a teasing trailer for the main event.jphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14366756099517322071noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5964635297586456513.post-79520011066606824382013-07-23T20:44:46.232-07:002013-07-23T20:44:46.232-07:00Thanks Leanne! You know, when I was writing this, ...Thanks Leanne! You know, when I was writing this, I almost left out details of what the ex did to her, that way we really wouldn't know if she was lying and just hated the man...kind of puts a different spin on Miranda. Thanks again!Hygge Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07518356793147594574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5964635297586456513.post-56519198105795142442013-07-23T20:43:19.233-07:002013-07-23T20:43:19.233-07:00Yes Sally, she did. And thanks for your kind words...Yes Sally, she did. And thanks for your kind words! It was a fun one.Hygge Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07518356793147594574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5964635297586456513.post-20114562501244454422013-07-23T20:11:30.470-07:002013-07-23T20:11:30.470-07:00Wow, Scott! This is so good; Miranda is a brave an...Wow, Scott! This is so good; Miranda is a brave and intelligent woman. I like woman characters who are bold and do whatever it takes to survive. I don't know that I could ever be so bold. :)<br /><br />Have you ever read Jason Andrew Bond's Mortal Remains? Miranda reminds me of Erica Morgan in that story... if you are ever interested, I highly recommend it. <br /><br />Nice work again!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5964635297586456513.post-66185349375940857192013-07-23T09:52:58.216-07:002013-07-23T09:52:58.216-07:00She certainly got her revenge! Great story which f...She certainly got her revenge! Great story which flowed well.Sallyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14090018804016223955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5964635297586456513.post-58149019869625713192013-07-22T08:39:39.912-07:002013-07-22T08:39:39.912-07:00Thanks Chris for your kind words and editing obser...Thanks Chris for your kind words and editing observations (it was written after a long weekend with the family...). Those prompt words did work out well with this one--not true for all of these little stories. And the length...I've been finding it difficult to get to the 450 word mark lately. Thanks again for the comments!Hygge Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07518356793147594574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5964635297586456513.post-59609625603539761062013-07-22T03:57:35.134-07:002013-07-22T03:57:35.134-07:00I'll delete this, buddy...
There are some typo...I'll delete this, buddy...<br />There are some typos that broke the read. Have a look. Great piece tho!<br />~CAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5964635297586456513.post-7881350523345009552013-07-22T03:56:06.110-07:002013-07-22T03:56:06.110-07:00Great little intriguing yarn, Scott! What a fanta...Great little intriguing yarn, Scott! What a fantastic stretch. The prompt words were seamlessly integrated in the story; no part of if felt contrived to fit the prompts in at all. What astounded me was seeing that you created this compelling scenario with backstory, present resolution, and a foreseeable future in under 400 words. Well done, my friend.<br /><br />~ChristopherAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com