This week's writing prompt has a great picture! (well done chooser!). This time I didn't push the 500 word maximum limit--it was more like 300. The rules haven't changed. 500 word limit, must be posted to the following websites: HERE, HERE, and HERE (thanks Nicole, Carrie & Tina for posting). You've got a week to write it (deadline for this picture ends next Wednesday) and these words must be included:
Wallet
Circus
Kid
Cruise Ship
Slide
Here you go. Hope you enjoy it!
Daydream At Dusk
“What
are you, some circus kid?” Paul asked Billy as his best friend continued to
walk atop a rusted and almost abandoned rail line at the south part of town.
Paul watched his friend teeter and almost fall several times but the boy
remained vertical on the track.
“Ha!”
Billy laughed as he eventually lost the battle of gravity and his Chuck Taylor’s finally
met solid ground. “That’s a record!”
“I’ve
gone longer.”
“No
you ain’t. You slide off, every time. I win!” The elated seven-year old
began dancing in the fading light of dusk. “You wait,” Paul said. “I beat it
tomorrow.”
“Yeah,
we’ll see,” Billy said and the two continued down the path in silence.
“You
know what’d be cool?” Billy said after a moment where only a family of
starlings stirred the humid air. The boy, older by exactly 13 days,
continued without a reply from his friend.
“It’d
be cool if I found a wallet and it had lots of money in it.”
“That’d
be cool,” Paul said without taking his eyes off the path before him.
“And
it’d be even better if it had lot’s o’ money in it. You know, like Tom Cruise
money.”
“What’d
you buy with Tom Cruise money?”
“I’d
buy lots o’ stuff…like a big Tom Cruise house, and a couple o’ Tom Cruise
cars—maybe I’d even buy a Tom Cruise ship.”
“Tom
Cruise ain’t got no ship.”
“How
you know?” Billy said. “I bet he got a ship…I bet he got a big ol’ ship.”
“Tom
Cruise ain’t got no ship.”
“Yeah,
maybe. But Tom Cruise could have a
big ol’ ship if’n he wanted one.”
“True dat,” Paul said as the boys reached the only bend in the tracks for
miles. They walked the next 10 minutes without either of them saying a word.
I love it. Like taking a picture from a childhood memory. Nice!
ReplyDeleteThanks ESN! This one was fun to write. I do have memories of just walking somewhere with a friend.
DeleteThis makes me picture Tom Sawyer and Huck Finn. Love it! Well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks! I just finished Huck Finn...great book. Thanks for the kind words!
DeleteI love how he wants Tom Cruise everything. :) You really get a look at the personalities of the two boys.
ReplyDeleteYou know how it is...had to get cruise ship in there somehow... ;) Thanks!
DeleteThis reminds me of old country roads and farm boys as they sneak out for a couple of hours of fun. Good post!
ReplyDeleteThanks Anne! That's what I was going for.
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