Fields of Barley, Vol. 13
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The fun
lasted only an instant as an old yellow Toyota driven by Janie Lowenstein, the woman he would one day marry, slowed as it approached the intersection. Then, without warning, it continued
through the light and knocked Mark’s advancing old primer-gray Volkswagen bug
into a hedge, the trusty German import would never be driven again. The sound
of the crash startled Mark as he watched the accident unfold and brought back the memory of terror that gripped
his heart as her car made contact. He remembered many things about the
accident, but he tried to forget the terrible sound of smashing metal, plastic,
and glass that was heard once again in his ears. Seeing the small cars push
each other around reminded Mark of childhood toys with which he had once
played, only this time real people exited the vehicles after the dust cleared
and the damage was done.
Just like
before, Mark’s heart skipped a beat as the driver in the yellow Toyota (the
most beautiful woman Mark had ever seen) emerged from the driver’s side of the
Tercel. She knew she had broken the law, but at the moment she thought of
nothing else but the safety of whoever hit. She didn’t even notice the cut on
her forehead, or the blood that was slowly falling over her right eye and down
her cheek to where it left her face and fell in steady drops, leaving a trail
of blood that followed her across the pavement.
She reached
his car just as Mark opened his driver’s side door. Instantly Janie lunged at
Mark just as he unlatched his seatbelt. “Are you alright?” she said
almost screaming. Everyone who stopped to watch could hear the panic in her
voice.
Mark saw
his future wife again for the first time as he sat in his car. He had turned to
open his door when immediately it was thrown open and Janie hovered above
him, looking down and yelling something. It wasn’t the accident, but Janie’s
beautiful face that took his breath away. As Mark told his friends after the
accident, the blood falling from her wound gave Janie the appearance of a china
doll who’s face was cracked—only this crack yielded blood. He stared up at this
woman and he completely forgot what had happened, leaving him only to gawk and
remind himself to breathe.
To Janie,
the lack of communication coming from the car’s driver told her
something very serious had happened. She thought the man was dead, even though
he was looking at her, sitting upright in his seat and moving to get out of his
car. But the adrenaline in her system told her that he was dead, and that
she had killed him. Janie reacted as she had been trained to do as a municipal
pool lifeguard. Her only thought was to get the man out of the car and try to
bring him back to life.
To be continued...
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